Tutorial Targets 11/01/13

1. Go back through essay plan- try to add theory/issues/debates & link to quotes/research you have (check out oct 25th macguffin)
2. Book bibliography- include key media theorists aswell 
3. Include a section on video games in bibliography (producer, year, country)
4. Audience theories - Desensitisation, uses and gratifications, hypodermic model/effects theories 
5. Try to incorporate quotes about theoretical ideas in your essay 
6. Don't Use 'My'/'I' in essay 
7. Get balance right between quotation & own words 
8. Keep looking for up to the minute research